light not heavy
now not then
air not earth
less not more
music not song
pictures not words
feeling not thinking
giving not taking
here not there
quiet not loud
we not I
now not then
air not earth
less not more
music not song
pictures not words
feeling not thinking
giving not taking
here not there
quiet not loud
we not I
3 comments:
I asked for positivity and you obliged. Of course positivity can only come from within, and within can only come from without.
This piece feels forced, and the last line feels like a compromise.
I could say, "eh, nice positive post" and encourage more, but you know me!?
I always enjoy your writings. I did think before writing this reply? But I would be doing you a disservice by not speaking my mind.
Thats all. You can kill me in a few weeks.
Heh, I love you piccy of the sun.
No probs with the comments.
In truth, it was forced, It took jsut 5minutes so it lacks a little polish that may have made it seem less forced.
I am not protective or sensitive about feedback on what I write. Feedback is a gift, I take it and consider it. No less, no more.
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